“It’s ok.” He says to his daughter after looking at the wreck that used to be his car.
“It’s ok.” He says with moist eyes as he sees the ring another man wants to give his daughter.
“It’s ok.” He says with faint bravery before breathing his last.
For the 33rd Trifecta Challenge.
This is good. The emotions are so universal. Like it!
Thank you. I was trying to think of what to write and this grabbed me and wouldn’t let go.
I like how you tied the breathlessness of each of the events into the final breath. Yes, I think he is okay.
Fascinating that letting her go in marriage should be a tragedy like the first and third items in the list.
He’s losing his litle girl.