Daydreams of: Vision

“There’s nothing cute about it,” he said. The register of his voice indicated decision more so than discussion.

She disagreed heartily and privately, staring past his head and out the window behind him.

Outside the idling car, a decrepit house leaned dangerously off kilter.  Windowless and rotten, it silently awaited the wrecking ball.

“I think it would make a great project,” she replied.  Let’s buy it!”



This based on a real moment brought to you for the Trifecta Challenge.


23 thoughts on “Daydreams of: Vision

  1. I’ve got a Trifecta Challenge for you. Well, more of a step-up in difficulty than anything. In “On Writing”, Stephen King pretty much blasts adverbs and advises to stay as far away from “-ly” suffixes as possible.

    Think you can knock out a Trifecta Challenge without one?

  2. Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so I hope you were able to cast your votes. (There’s still just over two hours left if not!) Winners will be announced with the Monday post. Hope to see you back then.

  3. Pingback: Looking back and looking forward. | Thoughts, Ramblings, and Daydreams

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